Linkin Park

This is a song idea I have, so if you'd like you can critique it. Its to the beat and tempo, but not music, of Nobody's Listening from Meteora

I dare you to try and stop me. I dare you to try to bring me down. I dare you to tell me it wont work 'cause then I'll have all the strength I need to prove you wrong.

(chorus) So just bob your head like this. Just pump your fist like this. Rock it out like this. Let 'em know who the king of the mountain is.

I can feel the music pulsing through my skin like a heartbeat keeping me alive in this deadbeat world that we live in, breathe in, forced to crawl in. Its like a rush of adrenaline, a tingle down my spine thats never ending running through these veins of mine, as real as air, serious like a heart attack. So I'm pumped up, and Im psyched up, ready to tear anybody's face up. Just bring it and try to sink it into my brain that my plans for my future and my plans for my life are gonna go out like a light.

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I know I'll succeed. I know I'll prosper. With my girl at my side I know I'll go far. Nothin in the past is going to hold us down. If God is with us, who can be against us? So I say again, try to bring your doubts, try to give me negativity. Your words will be like water on rock. Show me what you got! Sticks and stones may break my bones, but my faith and my God will never leave me.

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